Feedback from the first draft:

We showed a few people our film opening and asked for some feedback on what could be improved, some suggestions included re filming a few clips which unfortunately we could not get around to doing, but they also suggested to make the backing track of the birds louder and to add opening credits such as the producers and director. We took this into consideration and improved our product by adding these suggestions into it which makes it have a far better professional feel to it. Also to improve our outcome we designed a logo which could be implemented at the start to brand the film as our own and that it was produced by that film studio.